Be a Bee!
Ideas
Writing contains at least one complete event. Writing indicates
setting. Possibly the student selects to write about how his /
her friends respond to their new BEE friend. This story may
include emotional responses to bees and their formidable stinger,
and yet from the BEEs perspective, the vital role that bees
play in the whole pollination process. The event described my
detail the allergic reaction people have to bee stings. Or
the student may tell a story about what he ate for lunch as a
bee, and how this eating was so very different from his school
friends eating habits. The descriptions may
includethe taste and stickiness of the nectar and the
packing and transport of pollen.
Organization
Writing contains a beginning, middle, and end.
Sentences
Story is interesting because it has a variety of sentence lengths
or different kinds of sentences.
Word Choice
Writing uses action words that keep the reader interested. Many
words stem from plant science and may includestinger,
insect parts, invertebrate, allergic reactions, flower
partspistil, stamen, pollen, pollination
etc.
Convention
Spelling, punctuation and paragraphing are accurate.